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how does it feel?

how does it feel to stand alone?
to see the moss and want to go home
to not know the way
day by day
how does it feel to see the sky
to want to go farther
and to want to go high
how does it feel to be like me?
to see the negative
at the worst it could be
how does it feel
to look outside
to feel the pain
to want to hide?
how does it feel to be
an outcast to just walk by
really fast
to try not to look in
peoples eyes
i know they are
talking about me
i heard my name
they say the was i dress
puts my parents to shame
they say i worship saitan
just cause i dont go to church
i walk by and bite my nails
white fingernail
polish with black x's
chipping away
i painted them the other day
im losing my mind
i dont want to say
i hate living in fear
of being this way
to look out the door
with time just passing away
i wish someone would tell me
im okay
that im not falling
ten feet under
to feel sick and
see the thunder
to feel the sun
on a tear stained face

so how does it feel to stand alone?

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  • crazymomma
    June 6, 2008

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    Wow! powerful and deep. You must be a very mature 15 year old. This was so sad. I'd be happy to be your friend if you want to


  • Ephiphany
    February 23, 2008

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    wow very deep words, can honestly relate...wow.
    thank u for sharing.








































  • seasonsoflove
    November 27, 2007

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    wow... trust me, i can relate to this...
    "how does it feel to be
    an outcast to just walk by
    really fast
    to try not to look in
    peoples eyes"
    this is completely true... it is hard, but you'll get through it all... if you ever need to talk.....

    anyway, great rite on this one... best of luck in this contest!
    ~rocklover91