i Was only younge and there it was
an angel in the sky i couldnt belive what i saw
so i blinked and rubbed my eyes
when i looked again i relised it was guideing
another spirit through the air
i ran home as fast as i could and told my mother what i saw
she looked at me in disbelife
but i new i was right
from that day i see Simlar things
of spirits whome have not yet crossed
they tell the story of so much Love life and loss
I Try to help them but dont yet understand there Pain
one day i will Help tehm Cross With out Any Shame
Author notes
This is true, i see weird spirit things and understand things other people will never. i feel pain of others in the street and other forms undead from human.
A contest entry
- AS Spirits abound..... by natchstucco.
550 points, ended September 29, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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hey i like it great job
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apart from a few typos...which you can do a spellcheck for, this is a pleasant enough poem. good luck in the contest.
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Thank you
xBx
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