It Hurt at first
then it started to ease
im druck at the moment
added with some weed
my life became a joke
whitch nobody understood
my friends the all left me
My Boy Friend never could
He says he loves me but i no
hes off with them girls
The blonds in witch he like
when they do there stupid dance
they never put up a fight
he pretends he loves me
but he cant stand the cold
My old friends no my Secrets
never to be told
finaly he leaves me
my life is at the end
for how ever long i tryed to pretend
insted im of round the bend
il see you in another life
goodbye is for now
not that you care for me
im a stupid Lost Girl
A contest entry
- Anything you like by skull8686.
400 points, ended October 2, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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good
very sad and emotional but the best poems come out of emotional times! Luckily, this has never happened to me before but if it happened to you... I am so sorry. Beautifully written.
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some points i disagree with... but overall a nice poem
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why do you Dissagree.
Tbh All In All i No Half of this isnt True or My Feelings so i changed the Author notes
Its mainly how i used to feel and what i see round my Friends Oh Well
xBx
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alright!
that was sad but it was good thanks for entering good luck
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