surrounded... No! shrouded in presence
as she sharply illuminates the woeful world
night discreetly dissolves into breathful bliss
daydreamings... enhanced, entranced... exotic, erotic...
yearning... inhaling her idyllic shine... pure joy
she's love... she's pure love...
tempestuous catalystic cause of lightning's casualties
organic, orgastic... flashes of fire
radiating reverence... billowing brilliance
in her words my reflections
every softly spoken syllable's faithful foreplay
singing promises of my soul's satisfaction
A contest entry
- seduction by Leslie.
525 points, ended October 16, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A very sensual piece for sure...Congratulations on the Silver...Hope all is well...
Soulful Woman
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I really enjoy this piece, I love the fast beat to it, somehow this piece took me in a faster level of captioning the images, I enjoy that, besides there was something very original to it, that I appreciated, excellent job.
Thanks for your entry.
Leslie
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maravilloso carino...me parece espectacular!!!
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Setzy!
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great balls of sulfur raining down from the heavens! not bad! dang! good golly miss molly! holy crap! i'm- i'm amazed!...no i'm not...cause you're so talented. you have a special purpose (i really mean that. no smart-ass 'tude there)
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pretty hot stuff this one
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She's going to love this it's well writted with good flow and image and full of emotion. It's written for the most wonderful girl in the world.
Love,
Amera♥
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Humm... Don't know if I'd go that far... but she's one of them...
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