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Love Naïve

Innocence blushes behind these eyes,
warm rose rising when they touch yours;
a kiss on every part of me,
shy handhold complete.
Flush flustered serenity,
cheer with nervous sickness.
Constant waking dream becomes truth
in reality's distracted haze
and meek smile a ready companion.
Common rarity bestowed;
entities young and old enshrouded,
cloaked by fantasies naïve,
from all Earth hidden save
the blushing seal of Worship.

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I'm not sure if it sounds finished... I might try to come up with another ending for it, but in the meantime please feel free to comment!

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  • burdened
    September 23, 2007

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    oooooooooh this is really pretty! loving it!! this is really gorgeous, i can see the pretty picture... XxxxX