Breath-held pause
cheek to cheek slant
like cat to pounce
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu.
450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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an exciting moment
never to forget...I guess we can read much into this breathtaking moment...naught I see something inside myself to it too...no longer can my breath withhold what I am feeling..I must breathe to let my heart unfurl...
and then sigh
oh oh
mal -
very creative my dear and romantic and yet playful
very nicely done. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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"Breath-held pause"
Ohhh. Yes. I remember that gasp. When one finally realizes they must breathe before they fall. Good luck in Albert's contest, my Friend. 
Wanda
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tight ten words. Mrs Marple could easily solve this one.
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Ahhh! I have one of them that's long overdiew!
...Sighhh!
Got me wanting it more, Poet! ~ Nicky♥
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