Rumors are a lot like a match
Once you start it,it'll burn all the way
And it won't stop for Logic's charade
It won't stop 'till the end
Fast it burns
And people do pretend
While second by second it widely turns
Spreading more vigorously until it's too late
And not even simple water
Can stop the ferocious fire it's made
It burns down the house
Ruining people's lives
But no one cares...
The burned up flesh wasn't theirs.
Please tell me what you think
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This is so true... and the way you have put it into words is just fantastic. I'm guessing this is based on something that happened at school?
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yeah school related! XD Thanks!
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Well don't even sweat that.. everyone goes through bull shit rumor drama in high school one time or another... and besides... none of it matters after high school.
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yeah I know...I'm still mad but I'd never do anything rash.
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Awww ust so true, how hard and painful it is, killing you so much, happening all around us...
Mr.gossiper,
Antonio
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Exactly Mr. Gossiper
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Woah. This was just simply amazing. I loved the ending. It was strong and really powerful. There are some great lines in your poem. I loved the flow and the vivid imagery. I totally agree with you on this subject.
Great job. Amazing lines. I really loved the read. Thanks for sharing. 
Take care and thank you for the lovely comment on my piece!
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Thank you so much! yeah someone was spreading somethin' about me so I wrote it. lol
I'm really glad you liked it so much.
And your quite welcome for the comment on your piece...it was good.
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Wonderful poem...Loved each line...So much truth you speak in them....Keep it up and keep up your high thinking!
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Thank you!
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there is a 'rumour',,you are a very good poet ,smile true
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XD I love that rumor! *hugs* Spread that one around...haha
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