Break out,
reach too far,
take chances,
catch a star.
Leave here,
tomorrow cry,
always laugh,
never lie.
Fall in love,
make mistakes,
help a stranger,
give or take.
Live your life,
stay true to heart,
have a story,
fall apart.
Author notes
I won Silver with this poem. "I WANT TO WIN" 
Please and Thank You.
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A contest entry
- Anything you like by skull8686.
400 points, ended October 2, 2007, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
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450 points, ended October 3, 2007, 7 entries
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400 points, ended May 31, 99 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Sweet & True
Thank you for entering PREWRITES FOR BRONZE & SILVER
TROPHY WINNERS.
Wishing you the best
till then
stay
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I like the rhyming to this. great write.
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aww this is so sweet. i love the rhyme, and the short lines. totally awesome.
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Very interesting... I love the short lines... Very well done here poet.... Beautiful in fact.
Nicely done, and you deserved the trophy 
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its very good
jeez!
we kinda think alike....its .....kool.
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Your lines are short and sweet and a delight to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering this excellent piece.
David
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I love the short lines you have used, easy to read and understand. This is really an excellent short summary of life, in which every single word counted... I enjoyed reading it. Well done with the rhyming also.
Thanks for sharing!
Keep on writing!
Annie
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I like your shotgun approach to life advice, with the right buckshot you can just about cover it all. You say a lot in these few verses with an economy of words yet is meaningful. I like the butterfly background also. Well done friend.
Happy
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Very, very well done! Sound advice for anyone!
All the very best to you in this contest!!! -
yahoo
yay that was great!!!!
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