~
Cradling summer inside cupped hands,
as thoughts splash
in puddled pour of sin,
catching broken halos,
to soothe inner essence
of nurtured breath.
Her tranquil brook
to shimmer under lash,
of sun-kissed stars
blossoming eternal
inside reality's womb,
taking birth in pallid whispers
that reach inside,
to cavernous hollows
of imagination.
Whence I laid my tear
in creativity's debris,
cleansing curiosity
to find decoded queries
resting in resideus
of nature's bliss.
From feathered songs
that rang in morning bells,
now glory in salvation
of blooming death
inside eternity's spell.
I drink her fouled soul
to meet lips
of my opened wounds.
~
Author notes
ASFAND.
I was given these wonderful poets to read:
Laura Lamarca
Of Golden Glow
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3447132
luckynsincere
Whispered Memories
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3338630
Nicole Hanna
Birth
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3362038
My poem was based of Laura's poem 'Of Golden Glow'. One that had impressed me a long time ago and still inspires me!
Each one of these poets is amazing. I would recommed their poems as a read to everyone!
A contest entry
- For My Homies #8 by Tangled Angle.
450 points, ended October 2, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hi, please have this poem written within the next 2 days. That would be awesome. Thanks.
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Lol Asfand!!!
Your poets are:
Luckynsincere
Laura Lamarca
Nicole Hanna -
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finally you come!!!
I have been changed from Arnolds to Almonds, glad someone got it right!!!
Will get on it!!
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Almond?hehehhe
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Ahh voila! Here prodigy boy. Hmmm... starts with A... ends with D... and is 14... *thinks for 15 minutes*
Oo!! Pick me pick me!
You are Arnold.
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wait let me guess umm....Asfand!!!did i get it right...lol
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