You are my eyes...
making me see so many different things
opening up my world
shining bright into my life
You invade all my senses...
touching me where I need to be touched;
though not physically; you touch my heart
you listen when I need to be heard
bringing light to my darkness
You are my heart;
you are my soul
and maybe someday, you will know
just how much I love you...
Author notes
"I feel wonderful because I see
The love light in your eyes.
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize how much I love you."
A contest entry
- Song Quote as Inspiration ~ Come check it out by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Excellent
Very well done. So passionate and touching. Congratulations on your bronze.
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Wow! This reflects so much of me right now.
Beautifully said.
Nice take on the prompt.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
This was beautiful. All these words just bleed love and passion. I love that you took the quote and turned it into your own voice. Good luck in the contest.
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SUCH HEART-FELT BEAUTY!!!!!
Your words express what most of us strive to find in this world, an honest, sincere and true love which will forever be here by our side through all.
A very beautiful write Sandy.
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Beautiful words for *him* the one who you are so obviously head over hills in love with...I hope one day that he can find the same feeling within himself...I think it is there already, just some men are scared to let themselves be vulnerable to love..most likely because they have been hurt by past relationships..But I wish you lot's of love and happiness..And I think there is someone wonderful waiting to share your passion of love...sometimes unanswered prayers are the most precious ones that we receive..
Dusty
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Beautiful!
My dear precious sis, you have so much love within you, and each time you share, I can feel your heart sincere grace my own...as your words whisper sweet always. Much love sis, brother Timothy~ xo
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Another example of your writing proess...so beautiful and quite the blessing to the heart....great job as always....smiles, Terry
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Powerful write. I liked the last two lines the best. Love can be a powerful emotion. Sometimes even a spiritual connection to a person. I think when people feel a spiritual connection to a loved one, it shows just how powerful love can be. Good luck in the contest.
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QMG ~~~ Twinsy
This is so sweet, very touching and amazingly loving.
Your every word could melt a heart. Soft and lite, romantic, just down right perfect. I loved the whole piece.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Love Ya,
Your Soul Touching Twin
Joyce
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This is stunning.. I saw this contest and bookmarked it because I thought the quote was so unique. You have certainly made it your own. A wonderful flow with heart felt words. Great job and good luck.
Soulful Woman
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