Weaving on wings journey
Through September Shadows
Paving season sadness
Taste breeze
Forbid curtain fall
Breathe love dreams
Left in wind whispers
Dance in few companions
Swaying away from cradle memories land
Finding path way of light
To become sunshine hero
Awaken in amber skies
Born in liberty to fly
On mountains top wisdom
In eternal promise of phoenix rise
A contest entry
- PIF Saturday Quickie by kaibab.
475 points, ended September 23, 2007, 11 entries
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This flight raises sky is sigh for heaven
such color spun to wave in feather
fingers finding word to follow
as shadows fills in quivered hollow...
thanks so much for your entry
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this is a wonderful take
for the birds that fly
south for the winter
for they do start
out in the month
of September
Riftkin
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A very abeautiful tribute to the wild geese from Alaska who span the globe from breeding grounds and back. They are so majestic when they all fly in to a local pond. I used to love seeing them in No. Nevada in the Fall. Thank you for these lovely words. Walt
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Born in liberty to fly
On mountains top wisdom
In eternal promise of phoenix rise
well my friend..I see you too as one bird flying through your so eternal words amongst all birds here..a great perspective of the eternal life..well done my friend..
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This needs to be 60 words...you still have time to edit
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