My love is a liquid
like the water ...
if you put it into a
tumbler
it would be seen like
a tumbler...
if you put
it into a basket
it would be
seen like a basket...
and...
if you put it into a
heart
it would be
seen like a heart too...
Author notes
a repost..
A contest entry
- Your love life by Lilyflowersinspring.
450 points, ended September 24, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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...I like the title...It would be...and the ideas shown in the body of the text to contain that idea, but the most sincere line is this: My love is a liquid like the water....your love becomes and is becoming still, and flows...unrestrained...adaptive...this is a superb poem...hope it wins, I truly do...Peace, Rhonda
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Beautiful if you put it into your heart it would been seen likea heart to
Wow this is wonderful -
Good Write!
The wisdom of ages permeate your verse. Shows how learned you are in philosophy and the arts. I canimagine you winning hearts just through your words.
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