Dance

Serenade soul
Dance love passion
Life enchantment
Me and You

A contest entry

Pay It Forward (10 words only) by Malabu ...Update..10/11..I will finish judging by weekends end..thanks for patience by Malabu. 450 points, ended October 15, 2007, 43 entries
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Malabu
October 11, 2007

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cherrished thoughts
of love and all its inclusion..with your hand...I will walk with you the path of eternity...
we shall both know true love...

HeavenScent4U
September 24, 2007

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a lot of things included in your few words. sometimes a few can cover many things your background is beautiful by the way best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

Turtledove
September 23, 2007
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Saliant words alright
You sure boiled them down to their essence. Very good indeed. Walt.

rosepoet
September 23, 2007
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God bless thank you my dear walt I love when u visit my poem. You let me know if u enjoy have a nice evening

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