In gentle sway with grace they float
through oceans deep in flutter's freedom
glorying in togetherness
dancing in unison and harmony.
This ballet sways in tune of chorus
pirouettes to reach perfection's peak
entwined their essences move as one
while exploring movements of elegance.
Entrancing all the dais is theirs
in motion they cavort in rhythm
clear passage so the stage is set
sweeping beauty captivates the eye.
This dance of grace is mesmerizing
subtley they move with delicacy
no beginning or end to this hypnotic style
in radiance distinction flies.
Capturing glimmers of nature's brilliance
flamboyance warms the coldest scene
in true dedication this ballet plays
as all become entrapped in excellence
Author notes
Ballet 1
Photo by RISING DOVE
In a list
A contest entry
- P IS FOR PAINTED WORLD...Wandering on Way to Z by BLUE REW by Blue Rew.
1083 points, ended September 24, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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a good piece, the other week i spent nearly a whole sunday afternoon just watchign underwater programmes, they were abck to back programmes so i just lay in bed and smoked a lot while smiling.
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Okay, now I remember when I'd read your poetry before.
I entered Blue Rew's contest, too. I wrote one about a jellyfish ballet. Congratulations on the bronze! Blue has been on my favorite's list for a while. I could read her work all day. There's a poet on this site who was stung by a jellyfish. Talk about painful!
You write beautifully. I look forward to reading many more.
Don
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Wonderful detail in your word, witha beautiful flow of words. Congradulations on your bronze cup. This was a pleasure to read.
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beautiful flow, could feel myself flowing with it excellent as usual! congrat on the bronze!
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Such a gentle feeling this creates in the mind, I can feel the sway of the ocean along with such majestic creatures. You have painted the most glorious of pictures with wonderful imagery... well done on a fantastic piece. I am sure this will place in the contest, goodluck
Karen
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Beautiful music and dancing in this piece. You can really image the scene and it flows down the page in a spiral--excellent! Good luck in the contest!
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Exquisite imagery....
I love how you so eloquently displayed this undersea dance. This stunning piece of poetry truly "captivates the eye." Good luck in the contest!
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Elegant and mesmerizing...
the words do flow down the page and
it is like watching the dance unfold.
Wonderful what you've done with this photo.
Blue
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