Bet your life
Bet your winnings
Bet your horse
Bet your family
She will take them all
Winning easily
Poker Alice is the queen of the games
She never loses as she takes a smoke
Laughs at you for being a dope
Loves to giggle as you have to fold
Poker Alice is born to win
She would take your heart if you gambled it
Pretty pretty Poker Alice
Suduceing men into her games
She takes your hopes and your dreams away
Just by one little hand
She really knows how to play
So if you can
Never play this sassy maiden
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. Just, what I think of when I read this...
I really like this.
A lot.
You did an awesome job of writing this one.
"She would take your heart if you gambled it
Pretty pretty Poker Alice
Suduceing men into her games
She takes your hopes and your dreams away"
I really like that.
I may write something like this soon.
Just, in a different style.
I like your style a lot.
It suits the poem.
Well done.
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thanks I was thinking of the cowboy beebop episode that has faye valentine introduced in it. I kinda got inspired by that so I wrote what pretty poker alice could be like
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