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Forever Lives

Wings passions lust thoughts
Secretly light
Seductive Fairy
Rips mind apart
Forever lives in soul
Bones never rest in peace




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  • intanglio2ring
    September 24, 2007
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    RIP!

    Great usage of the pun!
    Thanks for a great entry!
    Tang


  • Turtledove
    September 23, 2007
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    So true

    Last line tells all, "Bones never rest in peace." How true that is. This is a very good write.


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    this is perfect and way better than mine,
    you have done a wonderful job here

    Best of luck to you.

    Riftkin