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Vast Autumn Sky

The sun has packed and moved
he dances farther away,
but he visits everyday
keeping his distance,
like love gone questionnaire,
the chills moved in
on this fine September day,
bringing with him
the shadows in the sea
of migrating birds, coloring
the vast autumn sky
to larger hopes,
that we can change,
as a season
in mother nature's dreams

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    this is sweet to think on
    for the seasons change and with that
    change new things happen

    Riftkin


  • kaibab silver member
    September 22, 2007

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    Autumn's blush of sky to fly
    season soaring shimmered fire
    growing wish to mother's ground
    in cover mulch of soul to spire...

    lovely...