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Use your fingertips as a duster !!!!!!!!!!

As dust just settles on my keys,
Right now I long for more,
the tender way you carressed me,
now discarded on the floor.
The words you always typed of love,
the words of strong belief.
Without you Clare i am a lonely soul
a heart's beneath these keys.
I know you can be strong once more
in talent you excell.
I long to feel your touch again
the words that flow so well.
There comes a time to say ok
and try again once more.
Write something short
meaningfull or dull.
Just get me off this floor!

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  • forever dreaming
    October 3, 2007

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    Oh this is fantastic and such an interesting take on my current prediciment. Apart from commenting on this contest it seems the only thing my poor keyboard has been used for lately is gaming and home shopping. I really enjoyed the feel of this piece and the personalised element to it. Really well done and many thanks for reminding me of my poor neglected keyboard. Good luck