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Hidden Agenda





You was so good

at packing your bag
I forgot you was leaving.

There was no tears, no final argument.


I thought we were catching the plane together,
when you filled our suitcase with love.

Even now I often think to myself,

you will be coming back home.

 

But I keep forgetting,

you also packed

your hidden agenda.

 

 

A contest entry

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  • Randomly Beautiful
    October 18, 2008
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    Thanks so much.


  • Luckintheshadows
    June 13, 2008

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    Short and to the point, I like that! I enjyed the direction of your poem.

    Thanks for sharing this,

    Luck.


  • Ms Raneika
    March 18, 2008
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    I like the storyline of your poem ...I thank you for entering my contest