I call him my steed for he's complete, always hot and full of heat.
With his teeth he removes my thong, hangs like a stallion nine inches long.
I enjoy taking off his chaps and unbuttoning his Levi pants.
A dream come true that you can’t measure,
for all night he gives me such great pleasure.
Caress my body with that rugged glove, as he ropes me with his love.
My lips devour his flesh so hot, riding him is my desire on top.
Naked body with just his boots, gun loaded and ready to shoot.
Wanting him to show me his moves for I have all night and nothing to lose.
He lassos my tongue with his grip, as he sucks down upon my lips.
A river streams between my thighs, as you hear my ecstacy of cries.
His gun inserted inside as he lets out twenty rounds at a time.
A duel of passion and fire, we both win with sexual desire.
In a list
A contest entry
- Calling All Cowboys (And girls if you wish) ~ Picture Inspired~ Over 18 only please by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended September 23, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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WOW. Now that is really hot. You really know how to turn a man on. hehe. I turned me on for sure.
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it's ok. ok better
it turn me on. i'm not use to women talking like this but i guess it was there all the time. i'm a little old fashioned but since we've been adults for so long whats the point in stalling. and this isn't stalling.
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Wow. This is really intense.
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Have Gun Will Travel lol. The old shows are the best shows and yours is the oldest show on earth.
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When reading it made me giggle and hot. Brilliant poem though. I love the way you changed the thought of steal and love your comparisons. Either way, that made my day
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Wow i love the imagery!!! And the violent allusion to his anatomy was great. I Loved it!! You are a good writer
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Very hot poem!
The internal rhyme was really good and you must have put alot of thought into this poem. Sounds like fun to me
One place in the flow that I did get caught up at was next to last line...
"His gun inserted inside as he lets out twenty rounds at a time."
for some reason this broke the flow for me and I had to read it 3 times to get the feel back. Other than that, Great job!
Becky
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strong imagery
this coveys the power of sexual desire well. passion that belongs here and is well versed. nice read. It does make me think of things I miss sometimes but that is another story -
Stunning hot writing here. Imagery is wonderful too. The flow was amazingly-good. Keep writing.
All the best
Wayne
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OMG! Lisa! Never knew this side of you existed. I'm late, huh?
Caress my body with that rugged glove, as he ropes me with his love.
My lips devour his flesh so hot, riding him is my desire on top.
Those 2 lines really spoke volumes for me. Ooops! TMI huh? Well keep penning those explicit thoughts on paper dear. Great writing. ~Inc." -
Bless it!! You are killing me here!! I loved this woman! (Pss -I got'chya on the chaps, the ex rode pro rodeo ~ Watchaaa!! lol!! OooWee!!) Luved this!!
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pretty clever wording... I like the
play in ideas and with the wording... nicely done and congrats on a deserved gold!
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this was well won Barbie i loved this to death your erotic talent is more embrasive than you thought woman you fucken fabolous awe you love me i almost though i lost my Barbie you take care of your self in China ok and dont make me a big sis
jewels
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Sis I would never forget you ever you are my heart and soul. and I love you so much. I am writing something great for your contest thanks for the read much love. LISA
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WOW!
Very sexual! LOVED IT! I do have to tell you i am from Texas and this reminds me of someing i could see or do near my house. lol... great write... nice trophy, too.
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Wow thats impressive from texas I love people from texas because they have a way with words. Gotta check out your writes. Thanks for your great reveiw LISA
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Commenting again for the group board...still love this sis
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thanks sis much love LISA
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Lisa, you don't love me no more?
Your taking on some guy 'cause he has a half-inch more?
Hmfffffffffffff! I still love you though.
Nice write baby, you deserved some shiny metal for this one, congratulations!
I love you,
Brazos
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You are so silly sweety I will aways love you miss you babe LISA
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Hey, congratulations on the silver, a worthy opponant, beat mine hands down.
Congratulations...Sue
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Thank you so much dear glad you enjoyed my write LISA
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Congratulations on your award, well deserved, great entry! Hot, have a lovely day, Ken IBT
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Thank you for your beautiful review. But your's was outstanding a super hot. Glad you won Gold because it was worthy. Thanks again LISA
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Mmm, interesting.
I am just picturing it all, lol.
Nicely done take on the picture
Thank you for entering and good luck.
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Thank you so much for the silver you always have some awesome contest. I alway look forward to your contest, Much love and peaceLISA
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cracking poem here! fab imagery and fantastic wording, lets the mind run wild with images! well done and good luck! xx
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Thank you for your beautiful review greatly appreciated LISA
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Damn!
Now that's what I call creativity. Boy, do I wish I was with my woman now! Great work.
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Thank you my friend I try to write different things. Glsd you liked it. LISA
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That's my sister...
rounding up the cowboys, and YES...indeed hung like a horse is my kinda guy
Ride on my sweet sister, like my doctor told me...its' good excercise Loved this from start to finish...my stead is my stud
Keep writing my naught by nature sister, I learn from the best.
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Thanks you sis for your great review and wonderful support. much love LISA
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Oh dear lord my friend, this was hot oh so hot,
and you have a way with those sweet loving words.
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Thanks you my friend but you was super hot. LISA
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