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They see what they want

Missing image
A perfect illusion
covering the sigh;
perception
the reality they swallow.
I flutter my smile
and curtain
what lies beneath...

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  • intanglio2ring
    September 24, 2007
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    You've captured the prompt perfectly!

    Loved the whole take!
    Thanks
    Tang


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    this is sweet and the clever way you used what most see as a noun and used it for a verb. you are wise and have a sweet way to spin a tale.

    Riftkin


  • EvilKate
    September 22, 2007
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    Love the verb use of curtain - very clever!