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Poker Alice

Poker Alice
She never loses
She never cheats
She is just a natural born winner
She will raise the steaks
And beat the odds
Take all your money leaving you in awe
Poker Alice
A mondern day robin hood
Since all that she wins goes to the homeless
Such a sweet little victor
Hope some day to meet her
If you ever lose to her
Be happy it is going to the greater good

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  • Kitsune Kyuuketsuki
    June 7, 2008

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    i like this, but you used the wrong "steak".
    the one you're looking for would be "stakes".


  • Karsis
    September 22, 2007

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    Awesome. I should've read this one first.
    Hahaha!
    This is great!

    You've done a really good job of portraying this woman. Not physically, perhaps, but as the type person she is.
    She seemed so much different in the other poem, but in this, you can truly see...
    Everyone has their reasons for the things they do.

    I like this, as well as the other one, but both of these togeather... I love these two!

    Damn good job on this!


    • LadyOfFate
      September 23, 2007
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      Yeah I took the idea of poker alice and kinda infused her with robin hood in this one and again I was thinking of cowboy beebop.