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Darkness

I feel so cold.
So incredibly numb.
Darkness surrounds me
A tight caccoon

Lights pass by
take no notice
the darkness hides
deep inside

I've lost my way
no one to help
I'm dying inside
But I don't understand.

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I feel numb in life now a days. Cant help it, no one can I won't let them.

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  • Mikerlantz
    January 3, 2008
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    Good, But a little short

    I think that if you tried you could make this poem a lot longer and more detailed... But idk.


    • The Boy
      January 3, 2008
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      Thanks

      Ya I know most of the things I write I feel are to short..


  • RavenChild
    November 14, 2007

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    Life can be good if you can learn to deal with bad that unfortunately comes with it. This is a good write and I hope things look up for you. Well done.


  • CrystalFlower
    November 8, 2007
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    Wow, a nice write, but very very sad. Can't wait to read more!


  • Amy fan 251
    September 23, 2007
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    I'm so sorry you feel that way. I really hope it gets better.

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