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Midnight Kisses

1. A perfect night with my beloved

bonfire roaring,
the stars shine bright,
laying on a blanket next to the blaze,
on this perfect night.
the time flies by,
and we're all alone,
in the middle of the forest,
nowhere close to home.
midnight kisses and starlit touch,
your arms wrapped around me,
breathing your love right in,
we both know it's meant to be.
coyotes howling in the distance,
full moon on this night,
our hands intertwined like vines,
i know this time, it's right.

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  • Sandra R Reynolds gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    good

    Good write and imagery I like 'bonfire roaring,
    the stars shine bright," and also "coyotes howling in the distance,
    full moon on this night' Best to you in the contest.


  • Silvos. silver member
    September 22, 2007
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    Very intresting.. Well done.