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I'm Feelin Down At My Darkest Hour

I am Feelin Down At My Darkest Hour

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

 

I am feeling down

At my darkest hour

Like the lights of blindness has shut enabling me.

No ears,

No sounds,

Of the beating crowds no more.

My darkest hour

Plays Russian Roulette

With my tears.

Speaking in years,

Forget the tears

As they have no meaning

What’s the meaning to me?

Its signs of a hateful sad path

Of pouring champagne glasses of rage

Getting revenge of

Feeling down

At my darkest hour.

I shiver

and shake

Mating with you

Leaving the spirit of my body.

Tossing and turning

Yearning and learning

Standing firm of my spoken jester

O’ honey.

My love can’t be prosecuted

By the displays

Of the resumes

Of what you say?

The hay is to tough for me to lay my thoughts on

To get it on

In rain storms

Of skeleton bones

Of washed up years.

Feel my tears

Taste my sincere

As I walk off this stage

Giving you a jazz play

Feeling my woman’s cry

reveal to me why?

Tell me the answer

Turn to my channel

And watch me

At

My

Darkest

H

O

U

R

.

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.

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

 

 

 

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I'm Feelin Down At My Darkest Hour
is a spoken word piece that I will
perform tommorrow I havent performed
in a month so I must go where i belong
on stage with my passion
surrendering my style
Mrs. Lady Enthralling

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 3

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    You're Amazing.

    You rip it no matter how you are feeling, you always bring it strong as the emotions flow, bravo, and know you are loved. Much light to you sweet soul!

    Mushy King.

    • you caught me with one of my classics Mushy you making jewels feel quite special my love thanks

  • HoneyFire
    May 1
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    this is such an awesome piece. So deep and sincere
    you have madd talent lady you.


  • Mystal LaRose
    January 23

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    gorgeous, sad, ddep i can fell the ppain and sadness this is amazing wow this is just amazing i love it such vivid emotions run wow this is awsome love the pic


  • sassylilpoet gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    another gorgeous write! Sad, deep, soul searching words that you have scribed. I feel the pain and sadness in this piece as you painted it so vividly here. I don't know much about spoken word, but I'm sure your performance went well and enlightened your darkest moment.

    Sincerely,
    Sassy
    Blessings and Love


  • Sign of the Swine
    December 6, 2007
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    Excellent flow...compelling. I read it twice.

  • CharlesDwight
    December 5, 2007
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    Very nice lovely and deep!


  • Mrs LadyEnthralling gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    <

    thanks for stopping by
  • almostgone
    October 22, 2007
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    Very nice piece. solid as always. Hope the performance went well.


  • Ephiphany gold member
    September 30, 2007

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    I can't believe I did not see this...

    very deep lyrics, here that shows all of what you are feeling. I think you will do well, as I always tell you in performing your piece. All my best

    e


  • MahoganyFlow
    September 28, 2007

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    This was filled with such sad emotion. I love the deseparity in this. The yearn of being needed. Keep Writing !!!

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    September 28, 2007

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    awesome write...i loved the tone and the flow throughout and your play on words with russian roulette [rush on rule let]....

    i trust your performance was excellent, thank you for sharing this piece

    Tasha


  • darell silver member
    September 24, 2007

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    Gray Shadows

    As I read this poignant piece I felt
    the burden of gray shadowed skies.
    Reflections of melancholy heartbreak
    that stain my hearts brain with the rain
    of bloody teardrops. Weeping in beautiful sadness
    of memories of my darkest hours. Very touching.


  • cutiepie gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    I found myself drawn as a moth towards the voice...Poignant tone throughout this poem, almost a wistfulness. Slight error in the word "skelton"should read "skeleton" Bravo Julia


  • kennethlaney
    September 22, 2007

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    Very Deep Poetry!

    That was very good Julia,
    I liked it a lot! Very soon you will look out into your audiance and see me there watching you.
    "BOO"


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling gold member
      September 22, 2007
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      thanks honey i perform this today
      with spoken word you want to remeber
      what your saying with out reading it
      from paper so this was good enough for
      me to remeber thanks for liking it
      mrs enthralling

  • Swan song gold member
    September 22, 2007
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    Beatiful very beautiful!

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