All before clash,
daring, enventourous flash,
heavy, intensity, jest
knight leaving missate,
never open predate
rook, smitten ting,
unlaced veil wing,
x-cluding yonder zephyr.
In a list
A contest entry
- A-B-C poems! by Dalawa.
435 points, ended October 8, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow, not only did you do an a-z poem, which I am sure I could never do, you also make a descriptive and wonderful poem! great job on this.
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thank u
thsnk u for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. I really appreciate this much. Haley27
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Great
I love how you can put so much meaning in so little words. Few I know can manage to do this. Great Job.
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forgot these
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Short simple, yet complex and rythmic
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thank u for the applaudes and the sentiments given to my poem. Haley27
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decent
I will be honest,I do not understand this poem. But it isnt really about if everyone understands it. I can tell that you put alot of thought into this. NIce work
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Thank u for the critique and the applaudes given to my poem. Had to write an abc poem, and this what inspired me at a red light.Haley27
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A little short but what else can you do with a limit of 26! I personally could never pull this off so I give you props for doing so! nicely done. good luck in the contest. ... You forgot g and q.
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Dangg =D
That Was Pretty Dang Schweet! <33
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good jood. I like the pray where it say All bwfore clash, daring enventourous flash, heavy, intensity,jest knight leaving missate,
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i have no idea what this is about but it sounds good
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thank u
I was having weird moment that instill an abc's poem, while I was at a red light images come to me in weird poems. Hope u liked. Thank u for the wonderful critique. Haley27
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unlaced veil wing,
[x-cluding yonder zephyr.]
what does that mean?! Great use of wording (lol) and your spelling and grammar is great. I love the way you have used single words to create your work. what a fantastic effort. keep up the great work! you talanted poet! -
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Thank u for the wonderful critique. My poem is based on black birds and I was sitting at the light before it turned green, I saw a group sitting on the electric lines as knights. The unlaced veil is a metaphor of a broken wing. I hoped u liked it. I had one of those weird moments and this what I write about sometime. Haley27
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I was wondering why the poem seemed so strange, but then I saw the contest it was for. Very well-done! Your use of ABSs was so good I hardly even noticed. Love your word choice...
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This was the hardest contest yet I have done,but I feel that I pulled it off. Thank u for the wonderful sentiments given. Kendhal22
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Wow! I didn't think anyone could write a sophisticated sounding ABC poem! ....but you've just proved me wrong
And great job rhyming... even putting imagery in...
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