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The Love You Give

Because of the love you give
My world has changed,
From loneliness and despair
To warmth and comfort.

Once I was lost
Always wanted and needing,
You give me more than
My wants and needs.

You fulfill my dreams
Of hope and happiness,
My eyes have been opened
To a whole new world.

Because of the love you give,
My heart skips a beat
When you enter the room
I tingle when you kiss me.

I was in the darkness,
Sitting in anger and fear
Hating all things that
Came close to me.

In coming to know you
You have become a part of me.
Forever changing me
Because of the love you give.

You have become more of a feeling
Than just a face, my heart has
A brand new home, this is where
I shall live until my last breath.

Because of the love you give

Author notes


Wrote for my husband that has stuck with through all my addictions and this depression I now sit in he always sets aside his own needs to try and help me with mine it's hard on him I know, but he's a true tropper and makes me want to go through all the stuggles I endure...I have no way of thanking him for being so selfless in taking care of me...

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  • SincerelyMegan
    August 31, 2008

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    This is a wonderful way to say I love you,
    I found it very deep and it flowed well.

    I really liked this poem! Keep up the good work and good luck!


  • trekkergirl
    August 31, 2008

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    I am sure that your husband knows how much you love him... this poem alone can tell him how much. Good write. And may you two live happy loving lives together for an eternity. Love is a wonderful thing isn't it.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    I loved this and love you hun. Your an awesome woman and poet. This hitthe heart of this poet. Great job and congrats on a strong husband. Your a lucky woman.

    Love ya sis
    Tory