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Poetry

Life
inscribed on paper
all the hurt,
misery,
stained with tears,

Ink is the water,
of the paper "Fountain of Youth"

To get it out
to find out what we're about
to let the world see,
who we
choose to be

That my friend is Poetry

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Written awhile ago, this is what I think about poetry.

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  • passionate-poet
    November 3, 2007

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    ditto

    poetry is the same for me ur not the only one to feel this way. thanks for sharing i really enjoyed this poem.


  • voodoo ink Greeters member
    September 28, 2007

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    Oh Wow, Brittany, this is one magnificent pieces of writing I have ever read...so short, yet it echoes so much depth into the heart and soul of petry...


  • Olivias Violin
    September 22, 2007
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    very good