Fairy dust, poisoned air,
intoxicating lust,
breathe in deeply,
but don’t fall in too far,
for death shall become you.
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Picture Prompt
A contest entry
- Quicky 20 x 20 x 20 Picture Inspired! by intanglio2ring.
525 points, ended September 24, 2007, 16 entries
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(waves arms in air to swoosh away dust)
Whoah! What did you do to the place?
(cough - cough)
Can't b r e a t h . . . (falls to floor - hoping for mouth to mouth)
Hey!
You gonna just let me lay here?
Thanks for the great entry!
Tang
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This reminds me of my sisters' abhorrence for that powdery dust on moths wings, when we were little.
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i really loved it, strong and powerful. I wasn't quite a fan of the 2nd last line, but the rest has really great word usage, and imagery. I loved it overall, and I also really loved your title. Great write, and excellent words. I love your vocabulary. Give it to me.
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this is one that is to the point
for that is what she will do
poison you and make you just die
Riftkin -
really short but very good, i like the wording really good.
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