remember today
when i was lost
and you were found
remember when you cared
and i didn't know you were alive
and yet i am left here
to hurt
remember the moment i felt so alone
and you didn't even care
you were just too busy
remember those times
when all you wanted was me
and all i cared about was you
remember today
when you looked away
and all i could do was keep staring
remember that secret
that you couldn't keep
but i will keep it
forever
remember those times
when i looked in your eyes
and you looked at me
and we smiled
remember those moments
when only we knew
and everyone else
was clueless
remember today
when you looked away
and all i could do
was keep staring
Author notes
this is the story of a girl who didn't fall very hard but just misses her friend, a large piece of her now past.
A contest entry
- Your love life by Lilyflowersinspring.
450 points, ended September 24, 2007, 13 entries
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Comments
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clare showed me this poem at school today!!!! she chose it for her drama thing. she was gonnna chose my blood of the innocent one but whatever...
i like the part where u said
remember those moments when only we knew
and everyone else was clueless
that was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and, like grace, my life story!!!!! sort of...
i dont wanna waste points but i give u 5 thumbs up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
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thank you, i love that part too, lol, yeah, thanks for the commentss
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Aw this is sad. but awesome. I know what you feel like...or what she feels like. Its like it wasnt anything serious but just a friend who was lost...yes many of those... Great poem
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I love it:)
you looked away
and all i could do
was keep staring
that is my favortie part...
amzing... its my life story
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