Lustful intentions
Grips my soul’s attention.
Spreading my wings to cover you,
Breaking chains that’s tied to…
Your minds hold.
Author notes
picture prompt
A contest entry
- Quicky 20 x 20 x 20 Picture Inspired! by intanglio2ring.
525 points, ended September 24, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Oooo!
After the "minds hold"
Great take on the prompt!
Thanks
Tang
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Nice,
I like your wording here, wonderful!
Thanks for sharing you sweet soul!
Always a pleasure reading your heart!
Peace, Your friend, Timothy
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so powerful my dear sister
your words take the mind to a different location
for it is with your understanding that brings it to life
Riftkin -
Nicely done sweetheart, another wonderful write flowing from your talented head and heart. I Love you baby, best of luck...Scott
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well done my dear sis well done powered thoughts for pmdering deeply indeed xxx best wishes xxx
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this is a nice take on the picture quite expressive in the few words used. The picture certainly is interesting. sweet expression you have penned good luck in the contest
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oh wow for few words this was awsome and beautifully penned
i loved how you crafted this
well done mum and best of luck
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Strong and powerful words gets the meaning across very well best of luck to you in thsi contest
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