My pitch black heart
clutches of evil
riding on my wings
lose the beggary
it will get you
nowhere now.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture Inspire
A contest entry
- Quicky 20 x 20 x 20 Picture Inspired! by intanglio2ring.
525 points, ended September 24, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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You are an amazing writer. You keep me awstruck with your work. And this piece is no exception.
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Wonderful take on the prompt!
A poetic write with attitude -
Thanks for the great entry!
Tang
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I love where you took this
for it is one great poem
from a wonderful poet
Riftkin -
I really enjoyed the last two lines of this poem.
It is a very powerful write and requires more than one reading. I enjoyed it both times
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Wonderful
Very well done. Great take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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I never have understood why someone will keep crawling back, time after time expecting you to welcome them openly after repeated lashings upon the heart.
beggary - that's a great word, and no...it will get you nowhere now.
nicely put.
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