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Be who you are

To hear like you want to be heard
Don't let someone say otherwise.
Speak your mind
But don't get hurt.
Do it like there is no tomarrow
And let us be what we want to be.
There's no stopping
'Cause there is more of us
Then there are of them.
No one will tell us what to do
Nor will they tell us where to go.
But we fear what they can do
So we obey
Every command they give.
Some can escape their power
But others are alone for that matter.
I don't know about you
But I'm tired of living like this
With every rule and command
I can't stand it.
Just want to get away from it all
So come with me
And we'll be free
Together forever
And for always
We'll be together.

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  • Figaro
    October 17, 2007

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    This is a great expression of that stifling that everyone experiences at times, that feeling that you're not free to be yourself. Really well worded and I think it evokes the frustration very well.

  • unraveled
    September 30, 2007

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    this is a great expression of what you feel. it's like a rant. i think you did a great job too. "i'm tired of living like this with every rule and command" i feel like that sooo much at my house. nice job <3

    cassidy