Sprite riding marrow
of one's secrets,
flying seductive wings
while sleeping.
Rising soul's
naked thoughts
when snoring
are suppressed
cries.
A contest entry
- Quicky 20 x 20 x 20 Picture Inspired! by intanglio2ring.
525 points, ended September 24, 2007, 16 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Loved the opening . . .
You captured my attention from the first words!
Thanks for a wonderful entry!
Tang
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You know, my mother would not let us have cats because she believed they got up to one's mouth and breathed in exhaled air... to this day, I am not comfortable around cats... now sprites...dangit...I do not feel safe sleeping.
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Thanks for the wonderful comment. Always something to worry about.
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this is beautiful. the images that you have brought to my mind are grand and I like them.
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Love the picture!'flying seductinve wings, love that line! Good luck in your contest ~Sie
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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wonderful imagery love th eflw and tones making this a great write from the picture
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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ooh intriguing
I like this. It reminds me of sleep-talking. I actually used to talk in my sleep. You could have an entire conversation with me, and I'd answer any questions with complete candor (always getting me into trouble).
I love this compact little piece, packed full of metaphors and lovely images.
Very well written!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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wow this is very interesting my friend. i looked at this picture and said, i cannot think of a thing to write
but your talent never ceases to amaze me, you can write on any prompt. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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