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For Your Fragile Eyes

Your eyes are still the most delicate part of you,
they are still the window to your soul.
Because believe it or not even after all these years I still remember seeing it creep through some shades of blue and black.
I was awakened and ever since never been left alone to sleep..
Your eyes are still the most delicate part of you,
they are the part that I hold closest  on those dark days when the clouds cover the sun but no rain falls from them.
I was entranced and ever since never to look away from them even when they are gone.
Your eyes are still the most delicate part of you,
they are the part that I still remember, with each delicate wrinkle tracing around and over your dark colored eyebrows.
I giggled when you looked at me and ever since wondered if there was more behind that stare.
Your eyes are still the most delicate part of you,
they tell of love, of trust and of pain.
Your eyes are still haunting me,
staring through the past and catching a glance even after almost 3 years.
Your eyes, how I miss those delicate fragile eyes that once looked at me with all the love in the world and ever since made me believe everything would be alright.

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  • jaguar
    September 28, 2007

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    WICKED

    This is a wicked poem. Who is it about. Great expression and form. I love the flow and am very intrigued


    • XenonTears
      October 14, 2007
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      This is about someone who 3 years ago gave me the world and changed me to a better person through their eyes.