whos sorry now?
me ?
you ?
him ?
her?
why are you the way you are?
i trusted you ...
i wanted to be there for you
i wanted you to come to me first
whos sorry mow?
i thought that we would last
why was i so naive?
you made me feel things that i never felt before
why did you beat my tender heart into the floor?
who was the one who said "I Love you" first
now look whos sorry now..
i wanted us to be together
yet you never loved me
was it just a front?
are you a fake?
why did you lead me into a false sense of security?
i believed you
you told me things that ive never been to before
look whos sorry now
you torn my heart into little peices
i never tought you could
you whispered sweet lullabys
into my ear
you fucked it up
you decided to cheat
your the reason why i dont trust any more
now you want me
you think that ill come crawling back to you
ill tell you one thing
you will NEVER find anyone like me
so answer this
who's sorry now??
A contest entry
- Three options, give me your best by Brucie.
415 points, ended October 10, 2007, 16 entries
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Comments
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Very emotional Great write. Awesome!
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Wow
I'm really impressed with this. I can definitely feel what you are feeling. A beautiful, emotional write. Thankyou very much for your entry.
Laura -
wow... this is exactally how i feel... this is wonderful... and i love the line you will never find anyone like me... thats awsome and so truthful... they might find someone close but no one can ever be like you...
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