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(Contest) Fly

Waves washing around my feet
Golden orange of the sky
Cool salty air blows
I almost feel I could fly

A contest entry

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  • PerfectImperfection
    September 21, 2007
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    Interesting take on the prompt! Best wishes in the contest!