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(Contest) Lying Angel

She looked like an angel
And tricked me with her lies
Spoke like an innocent
And I beleived her cries

Softness like a child
And hair as bright as gold
But her eyes another secret
Didn't see the deceit they hold

My Lying angel trapped me again

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  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    October 11, 2007

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    Wow! I really loved this poem!

    "...But her eyes another secret
    Didn't see the deceit they hold..."

    Great imagery and mood!


  • penman gold member
    September 21, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.