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Broken Heart

Midnight struck
Darkness became reality
The round moon disappeared behind the gray clouds
And all the shadows that lurk in the corners of your heart
Came out and swallowed it whole
But soon you wake up
Panting with tears running down your face
Feeling your body…making sure you are alright
And when you turn around
You see the reason for this nightmare
The one you love has broken your heart!

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  • PurpleMemories
    July 13

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    Sucks that no one commented in this one.
    I think many can relate with your poem.I like the dark feeling and the description in the first stanza.It's perfect and gives the poem another feeling.It's simple ,but shows how it feels to have a broken heart.