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I want...Can't You See?

I want to be free
…Independent
…Dependant on me!

I want trust
…I want you to trust me!

I believe in me
…but do you?

I want you to be there for me
…but not hovering over me

I’m all grown up now
…Can’t you see?


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  • PurpleMemories
    July 13
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    Sounds like me when I was 18.Nicely done,flows well.I like the background ,fits with your lines.