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No Goodbye...

No Goodbye…

We made so many promises,
But ended up not keeping one…

We created so many memories,
Full of laughter and life…
But now they are just too painful to
even recall.

And when I found out that he was gone,
That he had left my life
…with no goodbye
…both of us having so much to say.

But just so you know...
I still see you in my dreams,
every night and day.

And even though you are now,
So faraway…
Your spirit still lingers around me,
And the memories of us,
Bring tears to my eyes.

Because you left my life
…with
no goodbye!

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  • This is a sad piece.Reading it reminded me of a song,"No Goodbyes"-Blue.Your poem nearly made me cry and so far I think it's your best piece.