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My Forsaken Guardian Angel

My angel, break my heart in a hundred pieces
and put it in your plate,
drink the glory of my defeat
my body crumbles in your presence
take my eyes and put them in your necklace like pearls
just to be sure they won't look anyone else
devour me, forsaken angel
or are you still afraid
of the eternity that hides in a kiss
afraid to lose your immortality
are you so weak?
You were called Unfortuned,
cursed to betray your name
you don't deserve the pain nor the misfortune,
only oblivion
Forsaken angel that keeps my soul,
hipocritic custody of my destiny
my defender and my traitor at the same time
you,the one who stabs my back
show up,
I invoke you just to exile you
in the coldest of this hell called love,
to which you sentenced me without passion,
without compassion,
leave me blind and heartless,
I don't want life,
only the misfortune that your lips awarded me...

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thank you,my friend, for the inspiration, another one for you, only translated almost without changes

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  • Angelflower
    August 22, 2008

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    This was a really interesting poem.. The imagery was vivid and detailed, though to me the flow was a little mixed.But I still liked it thank you very much for sharing. bestof luck in the contest..

    Angel