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Playing Dead

Come on,
I busted my brains for you
Pulled out my bullet proof vest for you
You call this a song?
But it's just a tune
Now I don't know what to do
And did I mention?
That that is nothing new

It's too rough playing dead
Eating apples on my bed
Worm holes in my head
My whole face is turning red
Did I forget you?
Internally, is where I bled

Showers in broad daylight
Flashlights under the sink
It's creepy how things looked today
So I went to see a shrink
The streets all filled with lines
Lies, lies, and lies
Road kill after breakfast
My, my, my...
What do we have here?
Another animal tried to protest
So I just let him go
I thought it would be better
If he rotted in the road

My irises are now too brown
The sidewalk curved again
Yeah, I'm a little freaked out
But I can hold it in

I saw you on the planet
Between the left and between the eyes
Gravity shot me down
I jumped off the roof
But I thought I could fly
You must pay an expensive price
Not to be right

There's a snag in my sleeve too
For every time that you would leave
I pasted me back with some glue
But still no relief
I expected to be used
Like a recently fed spoon
But you can't base everything around food
Except for that Isaac Newton dude
It's like sitting in the bathroom
Without your shampoo...

Author notes

Yeah that was me rambling. I thought it was funny...it's also a very different one, I'm not sure...I like it though. It's eccentric. Bahaha! Thats a good word for it. Alright I'm going to go take my socks off now my feet are hot...
THANKS FOR READING. And reading this too...cause you know, you didn't have to.

(KALI in parenthesis)

Geettiii Geetttchhiii ya ya ya YA.

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  • Tweedle Dee
    September 23, 2007
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    gotcha yo

    YAKKKKKKKK


    best damed poem ever written.
    yup.

    • Tweedle Dum
      September 23, 2007
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      YAAAAAAAAAAAK

      ACE VENTURA!

    • Tweedle Dum
      September 23, 2007
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      Hahaha. I dedicate it to Isaac Newton and Herbal Essence. They really just..you know got me here. I THANK YOU SHAMPOO AND GRAVITY.
      Hey aren't you suppose to be eating a tree or something?

  • Pisces Pieces
    September 21, 2007

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    Fantastic!! Maybe you were rambling...or maybe just sometimes...it made me smile several times, how do you come up with some of this stuff, it's so original..things one would never think of in too much meaning or context but you seem to bring things to new insight.
    There is something beneath these rambles I sensed it as I was reading, but I will have to read it a few more times before I can get a good idea...if I can get an idea, which I may not be able to, but whatever...
    I LIKED IT! Lots! Kept me reading, that's for sure.

    Oh, I liked the flow too, it had beat.


    • Tweedle Dum
      September 23, 2007
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      Yak.

      I feel silly, I actually saw eminem rapping the apple part, it made me laugh. Thankyou lovely. Did you know koy fish live for like a 100 years? I did, but I just think that's pretty cool for a fish. Or depressing. Thats a long time to have gills and stuff. Hm. I shall go ponder this...
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