Disaster Dream,
Catching me.
Where's the light i long to see?
Is this the night forever in me?
i try to speak.
My broken peices lie at your feet.
You break me, bend me, shape me, mold me.
TAKE ME.
A contest entry
- Heartbroken by Love-Lee.
300 points, ended January 1, 2008, 44 entries
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did you like it? was the ending too abrupt?
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I really liked this. I think the ending to it wasn't too abrupt at all, it was just right. Fantastic write.
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thanks.
whoa really, thanks loads.
that seriously just made my night.
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i like it alot i especially like my broken peices lie at your feet. a great piesce
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wow great poem who is it about?
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