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The Wonder Of It All




I've no idea what to wear tonight
I want to look so good for you
make you proud as we walk into the room

your arm resting lightly at my waist
all eyes are turned to look at us
do they see the way I feel

can they sense the love that flows from me to you
my handsome man with heart of gold
the one who makes my beauty shine for all the world to see

I feel so wonderful tonight because I see
the love in your eyes and the wonder of it is
you don't know how much I love you too

It's time to leave and you offer me the keys
driving home, giggling as you stumble on the stairs
Oh my darling, you were wonderful tonight



"I feel wonderful because I see
The love light in your eyes.
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize how much I love you."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Music quote:-


Wonderful Tonight
by Eric Clapton

It's late in the evening; she's wondering what clothes to wear.
She puts on her make-up and brushes her long blonde hair.
And then she asks me, "Do I look all right?"
And I say, "Yes, you look wonderful tonight."

We go to a party and everyone turns to see
This beautiful lady that's walking around with me.
And then she asks me, "Do you feel all right?"
And I say, "Yes, I feel wonderful tonight."

I feel wonderful because I see
The love light in your eyes.
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize how much I love you.

It's time to go home now and I've got an aching head,
So I give her the car keys and she helps me to bed.
And then I tell her, as I turn out the light,
I say, "My darling, you were wonderful tonight.
Oh my darling, you were wonderful tonight."


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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 26, 2007

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    You recaptured the song beautifully. A nice interpretation on the actual song, not just the quote.
    Well done.
    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


  • tanzanite
    September 26, 2007

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    How beautifully you did this and took the actual song to write your angle on it. This is extremely well done and the feelings and emotions shine through every word. Good luck in the contest.

  • Bel Ange silver member
    September 22, 2007

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    this is briliamt interpretaton of teh song used fo this poem
    you hav writen again from teh lov in your heart and creatd such a beautifl poem to read.
    thanks fo sharin wit us an good luck in teh contest

    bel ange
    jan


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    September 22, 2007

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    Yet another that has left me speechless. How does one comment with words to justify your talent? Brilliant