I feel the glowing light of love
Within your enchanting eyes
like starlight, sparkling in my life
magically expressing pure joy
of our love everlasting
Cherishing all you are infinitely
for you're the glow igniting my soul
my illuminating beacon of light
even when you're sound asleep
Look for me, sharing your dreams
When looking deep into your eyes
mirroring the incredible light of love
feeling your presence within my heart
tears rain from blissful hopes
wishing you were here by my side
Believing in the love we're sharing
even when I'm not there in your arms
you'll be here with me for eternity
whispering thoughts of love, ours to stay
all my love, is completely yours forever
Author notes
PROMPT:
Use this quote:
"I feel wonderful because I see
The love light in your eyes.
And the wonder of it all
Is that you just don't realize how much I love you."
from an Eric Clapton song and write me
IN 20 LINES OR LESS
something deep with emotion.
A contest entry
- Song Quote as Inspiration ~ Come check it out by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Did You Win a Trophy? by Nam.
1750 points, ended October 18, 2007, 41 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A lovely poem that you have written here.
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BREATH TAKING
So very soft and tender, love truly does flow from your pen...Im so pleased to see it won gold!...sighs...I believe you have a magic pen
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So soft yet so powerful. This is beautifully said, and reflects so much of something hidden within me.
Wonderful take on the prompt.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
What a lovely expression of love. It was penned with tenderness and with so much love and affection. If this was written for me I would have had tears in my eyes. Good luck in the contest.
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Awe
This is so beautifully penned with such inspiration within.. Thanks for sharing your heart of gold that you willingly unfold upon poetic pages you sing love me do, and this is the heart and soul I love so true. I wish you all the best in all you pen, I really enjoyed reading this sis star~
Peace, Timothy 
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Sigh this was so ROMANTIC great entry for this contest
Well done best of luck to you in the contest
delila
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