You stare at me as I run towards you,
hoping for a hug,
a kiss,
I stop short at the face you make
and settle for a hand shake
and a 'hello'
I see you again, I'm embarrassed of course,
but again I try to face my fears,
you smile, but yet again you do not realize
How much I love you.
A contest entry
- Song Quote as Inspiration ~ Come check it out by StormGoddess.
450 points, ended September 26, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can relate to this almost playing as a broken record in my mind. A dreamt catastrophe on constant replay.
Nice take on the prompt.
Thank you for entering and good luck.
Storm -
How apt this was. I love the akwardness I see and how true that is to life. This fits the quote and I think you did a great job. Good luck in the contest.
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WOW this was sweet
very well written great entry for this contest
Well done best of luck to you in the contest
delila
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very nice, sadly written but very nice all the same. loving someone and having to take what you can get isn't always easy but some people are happy settling for any little part of someone as long as they can have just a part of them
best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed
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