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Gekko Goddess

I lost my tail
dewdrops of pink
lust in the wetlands
a wooden board
basking in the glint
of
Summer's hazy tasty
    eyes.......................

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 26, 2007

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    Definitely different and worth the deeper dig.
    Interesting take on the prompt.
    Thank you for entering and good luck.
    Storm


  • tanzanite
    September 26, 2007

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    This was a great metaphor. I enjoyed the brevity of it and the power inherent in short small pieces always amaze me. Well done on this excellent piece and good luck in the contest.


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 21, 2007

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    WOW great entry for this contest
    Well done best of luck to you in the contest



    delila


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 21, 2007

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    not sure about it applying to a quote as i haven't seen it but this was short and sweet and a very nice read. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed