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Dear Ana

Dear Ana, please hear my pleading screams,
Come back to my precious one.
I need you to help me thin,
To control this hunger and emptiness within.

I need you to get inside my head,
To make me resist craving food.
Food is the enemy and you my friend,
You will help me suceed at being thin.

Can you please come and keep me in line?
Make me stick my fingers down my throat.
Ridding my body of these vile calories,
The feeling of accomplishement is hunger.

I'm sorry I was weak and banished you,
I need you more than ever before Ana.
You are the only one who will keep me thin,
I have come to realize without you, I'm nothing.

Please don't ever leave me again,
I need you by my side to survive.
This is my pledge to you forever,
You are my goddess and I need you now.

Author notes

A poem that I wrote about anorexia with a bit of bulimia.

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  • FadingObsession
    November 8
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    The emotion is so raw and true. Brilliantly done.

  • strawberryfields4
    April 30, 2008
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    Wow that's a very good poem...sad but true.


  • anawarfare
    April 10, 2008
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    Very sad...and yet so true! It's wonderful geat Job


  • faerie
    February 23, 2008
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    Wow.

    So sad but so true.


  • moment liver
    September 21, 2007
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    awww man, makes me so sad. This was brilliant. just brilliant. I love it.

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