Just hear me out
My God, how can I tell you
How this feels?
Words unsaid
In my head
Just dying to get out
(Chorus: )
It's not you
It's just me
And this isn't where I want to be
But now
Least I know
I know
I need to write you a song
Please, it’s just like we danced
So close for so long,
But I had to go
And I’ll go
I’ll go…
Sorry doesn’t seem to work so well
(Chorus)
(Fingerpicking Interlude: )
Oooo…
Oooo…it’s not over.
Oooo…but almost.
Ooooo…
(Modified Chorus: )
It's not you
It's just me
And this isn't where I want to be
But now
Least you know
Least you know
This is your song
Author notes
I'll have the video up soon. I have a sore throat, but "ça marche".
A contest entry
- Three options, give me your best by Brucie.
415 points, ended October 10, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Music+ Me= Life by JustHolly.
500 points, ended October 26, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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not bad!
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Wow
I loved this. I wish I could actually hear it, let me know when you post the video ;-) Thankyou for your work, it really touched me.
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